My review
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Now, this is my unfair judgment from only watching half of the video, but if the trend follows for the other half, it won't really seem too unfair.
First of all, thanks for the positive comments
Now onto the bad parts...
When you are talking through your reviews, try to record all of your footage first. It doesn't all have to be recorded at once either. Just try to record all the parts of OC that you would like to talk about. This also includes removing parts where you were recording the loading screen.
After recording all of your footage end putting all the clips together, try and write out a script of what you want to say. It's kind of unprofessional to hear someone review something by saying "uh" "um" "like..." and the such because they can't think of what to say next. Also means you don't necessarily have to record everything you want to say in one go. Also means you get the time to remember that the map was called "Starship Troopers".
I know this was beyond your control (until you did it yourself), but PLEASE don't record a mass amount of people saying "rtv", especially on a new map that just got released for 1.35. The universal meaning for rtv (or at least in how I'm thinking) is "this map sucks", and would potentially draw people away from it.
(ok now I'm going through the full video)
Less long music intermission please :S
Thanks for the 5/5
It sounded a little unusual when you said "Everything is just do the mission". I'm not sure that's exactly how OC is.
(at end of video)
wtf music o_o
First of all, thanks for the positive comments
Now onto the bad parts...
When you are talking through your reviews, try to record all of your footage first. It doesn't all have to be recorded at once either. Just try to record all the parts of OC that you would like to talk about. This also includes removing parts where you were recording the loading screen.
After recording all of your footage end putting all the clips together, try and write out a script of what you want to say. It's kind of unprofessional to hear someone review something by saying "uh" "um" "like..." and the such because they can't think of what to say next. Also means you don't necessarily have to record everything you want to say in one go. Also means you get the time to remember that the map was called "Starship Troopers".
I know this was beyond your control (until you did it yourself), but PLEASE don't record a mass amount of people saying "rtv", especially on a new map that just got released for 1.35. The universal meaning for rtv (or at least in how I'm thinking) is "this map sucks", and would potentially draw people away from it.
(ok now I'm going through the full video)
Less long music intermission please :S
Thanks for the 5/5
It sounded a little unusual when you said "Everything is just do the mission". I'm not sure that's exactly how OC is.
(at end of video)
wtf music o_o
I liked the idea of the lobby waiting time.W0rf0x wrote:Stopped watching when i saw the dumb credits mod.
'I would probably smarten up before you meet Violet'.
'She has zero tolerance for idiots'.
fug's Obsidian files
fug's Obsidian clips
Obsidian wiki
Obsidian Map Database
'She has zero tolerance for idiots'.
fug's Obsidian files
fug's Obsidian clips
Obsidian wiki
Obsidian Map Database
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I don't even know. It's pretty obvious that he has no idea how to pronounce 'obsidian', which is kinda sad.LinkNEO wrote:-What did he call the mod?
I'd be lying through my teeth if I called that a review. Probably closer to a 'I like this mod lol' video than an honest critique of OC.-That was a review? It look like a frag video
And botches their names too. I'm certain I heard him say "SVNCoop" for SvenCoop.-It's nice how he disrespect other mods
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